Best, most authoritative credible response:
Reading, Reflecting, and More Reading
Common Mistakes that are easy to fix:
(4) She informs the reader that she lives “in the cruddiest part of a crudded-out town in a cruddy state.”
(3) The diction in "Cruddy" is abrupt. It has a type of simple-slang. Lynda uses lyrical words and is poetic.
(2) "Who can't even CONCENTRATE TO WRITE this because her little sister will NOT shut up," announces the narrator illustrating the harsh reality to her life.
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